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10-31-03, 02:21 PM
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Need help from the writer, poet people. Proofreading/Revisions
Never Feel Alone
Even in the time I am not by your side Rest assured the way I feel for you is always alive Seeing you in everything, letting my heart control my mind I close my eyes letting the feelings flow, still able to feel the warmth of your touch deep inside. Living each minute away, hoping you feel the same Waiting until I see you again to keep my hopes alive. Let me show you what safety and comfort awaits, being my everything to the world with your heart holding it's place next to mine. The happiness and joy you bring is all I need I can feel such strength while I still feel weak. Give me the chance to make you everthing I know Then I promise you, you will never feel alone.
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Can omniscient God, Who Knows the future, find The omnipotence to Change His future mind? -Karen Owens- 
Last edited by Shibby : 10-31-03 at 04:15 PM. 
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#2
10-31-03, 03:44 PM
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rest assured
Otherwise don't change anything. Those are strong words. I would keep them all.
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On my way for the day I find no sorrow Everyday is all the same there's no tomorrow And I feel like I feel Cause it's cold here where you left me Hey I think that someday I might need you somehow I, I think I might have loved you These things I said but you were A million miles away A million miles away On my way for the day I find my heart is not for taking And I know it's all but gone It only served to make me cry And I feel like I feel Cause it's black here with your memory On my way for the day I find no sorrow
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10-31-03, 05:21 PM
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Re: Need help from the writer, poet people. Proofreading/Revisions
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looks good brother, Im doin similar shit in school bro and the teacher saysIm good at it.
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#6
11-01-03, 04:18 PM
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Nice Shibby. She'll like it.
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On my way for the day I find no sorrow Everyday is all the same there's no tomorrow And I feel like I feel Cause it's cold here where you left me Hey I think that someday I might need you somehow I, I think I might have loved you These things I said but you were A million miles away A million miles away On my way for the day I find my heart is not for taking And I know it's all but gone It only served to make me cry And I feel like I feel Cause it's black here with your memory On my way for the day I find no sorrow
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#7
11-01-03, 10:12 PM
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That looks good bro Auriflex will like it very much
 Eat,Learn,Train,Grow IntensityX
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#8
11-02-03, 09:33 AM
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Ditto Mr. Auriflex,
No need to change anything that is right on the money. At times great works of art flow out as easy as water from a faucet, when that happens, don't quesiton it and don't change a thing, it is one of the great moments in life, one to be cherised and felt and not debated. Excellent Words Of Wisdom
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